Discount Geek

The Poem With No Name

I wrote part of this way back when I started to first post poetry on my site. This was actually meant to be what I was goign to post first. But due to things going on, I held off posting it.

The majority of you who read this may never be able to make any sense of it, and I don't really want or expect you too, so don't be offended. Some of my closest friends though may find out if they want to ask :)

Sorry if its not that good. The message is of value, not the form or sound.

I still remember the day it came to be.
So much to consider,
so much to decide.
But a willingness to top it all.

Roses and chocolate
Strong opinions, and long discussions.
Worth it all.

We're a team. A unified force.
One God, one Purpose.
One desire.

You give your all, and so do I.
A mutual understanding,
A common ground.

We can agree to disagree.
I know you'd never hurt me,
its just not who you are.

Committment seals the deal,
Its two and one,
Right down to the core.

I trust you completely,
No doubts or checking up.
There just is no need.

We've had our moments,
our trials, and our times of need.
But through it all, we stand strong.
Enduring the test of time.

Two lives meet,
and then many more.
Its a beautiful thing,
to call your own.

I know you love me,
there's no need to say it.
You show me everyday.
Its just that simple.

This poor peice of poetry
remains half written.
I don't know what else to write,
not yet anyways.

I'm glad I met you. You may never fully know.
I just wish,
I just wish I knew your name.

Selah



[Actually, this poem does have a name....]
posted at 09:03:59 on 05/06/06 by Ed - Category: Personal - Viewed: 621 times

Comments

Mike wrote:

Oooh, I'm the first commenter!

That was great. You even used Selah like is the Psalms.
05/11/06 04:40:15

becca wrote:

i like when you write and i can't understand... a taste of my own medicine it seems.
i know what you mean now, about wanting to know but dont. i dont...i'm curious, but i dont.
kudos
05/26/06 14:11:39

becca wrote:

i think its beautiful
06/16/06 13:56:52

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